The Mysteries of a First Draft

Ploughing on with my editing of Wickenham Court. Inspiration photo below.

Observations on my first draft include:-

• Did I write this? I can’t remember half of it!
• If it reduces me to gales of laughter, will it do the same for my reader? I hasten to add it isn’t a comedy!
• Note to self: Don’t do blanket Find and Replace – I had put “Name” for one character, awaiting inspiration for his title – I now have lots of sentences such as ‘The mention of the Timothy of his dead wife was like throwing cold water over him.’ Timothy was of course the name I settled on for my formerly nameless character.

I will admit to feeling a little overwhelmed at present. Any tips for stitching together the patchwork of a first draft please?

An Interview with Linda Gillard

I have been an admirer of Linda Gillard’s work for a while and am honoured to host an interview with her on the occasion of the launch of her e-book A LIFETIME BURNING.

Linda Gillard is the author of five novels, including STAR GAZING, short-listed in 2009 for Romantic Novel of the Year and the Robin Jenkins Literary Award. STAR GAZING was also voted Favourite Romantic Novel 1960 - 2010 by Woman's Weekly readers.

Linda's fourth novel, HOUSE OF SILENCE was published in April 2011 and has become a Kindle bestseller, selling over 15,000 copies in 9 months. She recently e-published her 5th novel UNTYING THE KNOT on Kindle and has completed a sixth - a supernatural love story set on the Isle of Skye.

Linda lives in the Highlands of Scotland, on the Black Isle (which isn't an island!) and she writes full time.

I asked Linda to answer the following questions.

When did you know you wanted to be a writer?

I've always written - stories as a child, copious letters, 12 years freelance journalism - but I became a novelist by accident. I’d been working as a teacher before I took up writing fiction and I’d had a mental breakdown as a result of stress and overwork. When I was convalescing I did a lot of reading. I was disappointed that I couldn’t find any commercial fiction that reflected my life and interests. This was 1999, I was 47 and I wasn’t interested in chick lit which was big at the time. I couldn’t find any heroines who were over 40. Older women were always somebody’s mother or somebody’s wife and they never featured as romantic heroines.

So I started writing the sort of book I wanted to read, but couldn’t find: a thinking woman’s love story that dealt with real issues, had believable characters, a gorgeous hero, but no easy answers. As a matter of principle I made my heroine 47 - my own age. This was suicide in terms of finding a publisher, but I didn’t care - I was just writing to amuse myself.

I got the writing bug pretty badly and joined a writer’s e-group. The group was encouraging and said I should try to get my novel published. I didn’t think I stood a chance because apart from being 47, my heroine also suffered from bipolar affective disorder (manic depression). But I found an agent who loved the book (especially the hero!) and eventually we found a publisher. That book became my first novel, EMOTIONAL GEOLOGY, first published in 2005 and now out of print, but I re-published it on Kindle last year.

Even before I'd finished writing EMOTIONAL GEOLOGY, I was panicking, wondering how I was going to cope with no book to write, so I started planning another (which became A LIFETIME BURNING.) By then I was convinced that writing fiction was what I had to do. It was the only thing I wanted to do.

A LIFETIME BURNING darts around chronologically, did you write it as a time line first and then mix it up or is this how the book came out onto the page?

I doubt many readers realise why ALB is constructed the way it is. Some reviewers described it as "random" or "chaotic", but it's the most meticulously constructed book I've written.

The "scrapbook" structure enabled me to cover 58 years of the twins' lives in depth, in 410pp. (I'd been inspired by Elizabeth Jane Howard's Cazalet Chronicles and wanted to attempt something similar, but EJH takes 4 long books to cover just 6 years - 1939-1945.) If I'd written chronologically there would be years where nothing much happened. No ones life is eventful year after year. So I followed Elmore Leonard's excellent advice to writers ("Try to leave out the boring bits") and focused on key events.

By juxtaposing scenes from different years I was able to reinforce themes, show how history often repeated itself. For example, a scene in 1964 where the matriarch, Dora Dunbar prepares for Christmas with her adult children is followed immediately by a scene from another Christmas, in 1952, when those children were 10. That juxtaposition gives the reader a sense of the generations growing up and the continuity of family life. It also brings home the way memory works: something in the present will bring back - quite vividly - a scene from the past. (In ALB I was exploring the workings of memory,, something I'd started in EMOTIONAL GEOLOGY. I think all my books are about memory in some way. It fascinates me.)

So ALB was written as a sort of patchwork. (I used to make a lot of quilts before I took up writing full-time!) I wrote the bits I knew, the scenes I could "see" and I built the book up bit by bit.

Not only did I not write it chronologically, it wasn't planned in any great detail. Such plans as I had were jettisoned in some cases when characters wouldn't co-operate! ALB is the book I'd cite to support my belief that if you let it, the subconscious will write a much better book than the conscious mind. I didn't know when I was writing it how things would turn out or why. I focussed on character, feeling and mood while I was writing it and I let the (very complex) plot sort itself out. (I believe character is plot. If you write complex characters, put them in interesting, stressful situations, then pay attention to their motivation, you end up with plot.)

Another reason why I chose to write non-chronologically is that novels have to have a fairly standard structure with climaxes at 1/3 and 2/3 of the way through and a satisfying resolution at the end. Human lives don't necessarily have that structure. By ignoring the march of time, I could structure the novel so that climactic events were revealed to the reader at the point where they'd serve the story best. I was able to manipulate the story and the reader's emotions by keeping them waiting for the missing piece of jigsaw. I think this might be why readers have found ALB such a page-turner. They are aware there are important things they don't know yet and they read on, hoping for revelations.

Having read most of your novels now (my favourite is still STAR GAZING, but loved them all) I notice that you explore some really big issues in your books, do you use an issue, e.g. blindness (STAR GAZING), post-traumatic stress disorder (UNTYING THE KNOT) as the inspiration for your books?

I don't shy away from big stuff! ;-) I think perhaps the key thing about me as a writer is that I have a really low boredom threshhold. I like plotty books and films. I relish complexity - of plot and character. (But I never cheat. It's always possible for an observant reader to guess my big twists. I put in plenty of clues.) It takes me 1 or 2 years to write a novel, so it has to be meaty, otherwise I soon get bored.

But I do find "issues" interesting. I like to write about challenging situations and I like to write books that stretch both me and my readers. Anyone who reads STAR GAZING will have rather more idea about what it's like to be blind - emotionally and practically - than they did before they read the book. If you read UNTYING THE KNOT you'll discover something about the hell army wives go through if their husbands come home from a tour of duty suffering from post-traumatic stress disorder (known as "the enemy within".)

But this is an old tradition of novel-writing. Dickens was the ultimate "big issue" novelist! I hope it's not too arrogant of me to say that my novels pay homage to the classics. JANE EYRE deals with the moral dilemma of having a mentally ill wife and the conflict between love and duty. THE TENANT OF WILDFELL HALL is about a marriage wrecked by alcoholism and domestic violence. When I was writing ALB I was consciously setting out to write a 21stC version of WUTHERING HEIGHTS, complete with echoes of Cathy's "I am Heathcliff!". (Emily Bronte doesn't make it explicit, but it's widely assumed that Cathy and Heathcliff are half-brother and -sister and that this is why the child Heathcliff is brought back to WUTHERING HEIGHTS.)

But I don't set out to write about "big issues". I passed a bomb disposal van in Glasgow and started thinking, "What kind of man does that job?... And what would it be like to be married to a man who does that job?..." Those questions formed the basis of UNTYING THE KNOT and I had a very interesting time answering them.

As a lot of writers read my blog and you are launching ALB as an e-book, could you tell us a little of your experience of e-publishing?

It's wonderful! After a few years in the "dropped mid-list novelist" wilderness, I've become a Kindle bestseller. (HOUSE OF SILENCE has sold over 15,000 copies in 9 months.) I keep my prices very cheap, but I make far more money from my e-book sales than I ever made from my pbs. Out-of-print books like ALB are now enjoying a new lease of life and I'm finding thousands of new readers. I've even sold translation rights to Turkey for two of my indie e-books.

I now have total artistic control and a designer who does brilliant covers for me, so it's hard to see what a tree book publisher could offer me now. Publishers say they'll promote you and get your book reviewed, but most authors complain about how little their publishers do to promote their books and that was my experience. It's true that promoting your e-books, marketing them, doing interviews like this one, takes up valuable writing time, but I'm not doing much more PR now than I used to when I had a publisher.

I've always worked hard to promote my books and build up a following. The difference now is that I'm in control, I know what's been done and what hasn't, and almost all the profit come to me. I still love tree books (and I still buy a large number) but e-books are the best thing that has happened for authors & readers since Allen Lane's Penguins.

Finally, have you any advice for newbie writers?

1. Write for yourself. Write the book you want to read. You can't second-guess trends and it's highly unlikely you'll find a publisher anyway, so you might as well write the book you want to write. (That's my definition of good writing: saying what you want to say in the way you want to say it.)
2. Be careful who you listen to when it comes to sharing your work. Writing groups can be supportive, they can be gladiatorial. If your group doesn't make you want to rush home and get writing, it's the wrong group. Leave and find another or work alone.
3. Read Stephen King's ON WRITING.
4. Write every day if you can. It doesn't matter what you write, but you need to build up writing stamina and get past the stage where you fret about a blank page or an empty screen. Trying to "write well" is a great inhibitor so I aim to just "spread ink". Once you have a draft page or chapter, you can go to work on it and turn it into a good piece of writing by editing, again and again. But first you have to spread the ink.
5. Learn to edit your work. Ruthlessly. I cut everything that can be cut, every word that isn't earning its keep. Strip your work down to its essence and don't pad or waffle. As Stephen King says, "The road to Hell is paved with adverbs."
6. Read other people's books and read analytically. Work out why a book is good or bad. (You can learn a lot from bad books.) Take your favourite book apart and find out how it was done. (The Classics are classics for a reason.) Then emulate that. No one will notice because you'll do it in your own way, in your own voice.
7. Make sure you're enjoying what you're writing. If you don't want to write it, who's going to want to read it?

Thank you so much for your insights Linda. I wish you well with A LIFETIME BURNING. I definitely rated it as a 5 star plus read.

To order your copy of A LIFETIME BURNING for £0.88 click here

Linda Gillard's website can be found at http://www.lindagillard.co.uk/

If you have any comments or questions about this interview please post them below.

Let the Editing Begin...

I’ve made a start! Big cheers and a high five. Seriously, I’ve begun to read my manuscript working title WICKENHAM COURT. I have finally worked out how to transfer a manuscript to my Kindle – you send an e-mail to your Kindle e-mail address with “Convert” as the subject and your manuscript attached, then it magically appears on the Kindle screen when you are connected to Wi-Fi.

It is hard to do, but I am reading without censorship at the moment and making a note of each scene on a piece of paper. The intention being that I can re-order them when I’ve finished. I’m also noting down research I need to do and things I need to check. Anyone know anything about mineral rights? Lol.

I’ll let you know how I get on with this journey as it is a voyage into the unknown for me. How do you go about the process of editing? Hoping for shortcuts!!!

STOP PRESS – Watch out shortly for an interview with Linda Gillard when her e-book A LIFETIME BURNING is launched on Kindle .

News and Goals

It never ceases to amaze me how fast Christmas goes. You seem to spend half the year anticipating it, planning for it and then it’s gone in a flash.

We had an enjoyable quiet Christmas and our annual New Year’s Day party. We are still not back to routine, but will be once little one is back at school. I took down most of the decorations and cards yesterday as it felt like time. The house feels huge and bare, but I know it won’t last long. I’m at the mourning the sparkle stage.

I had a very enjoyable time during the holiday as I started to trace a friend’s family roots. It struck me that my hobby is such a rich source of writing material. Indeed all of my manuscripts have some family history or family links in them.

Good news came before and after Christmas. Before Christmas I found out that I had been placed third in the Writer's Toolkit Flash Fiction Competition – link here.

After New Year I had the exciting news that I have a place on the Romantic Novelists’ Association New Writers’ Scheme. This last news felt as if it had crystallised my New Year goals, as I need to have a full length manuscript edited by the end of August for one of the RNA readers to take a look at. I’m lucky in that I have three novels complete at first draft stage, but having shied away from the editing process up to now, I know I have my work cut out. Also, how do you choose which book to send?

Have you had any surprising good news lately? If so please share.

The Lucky Button

Big son has just gone out to brave the motorway to get to yet another interview at noon. At least he’s getting the interviews and second interviews, but as yet no graduate job. I’m sure children don’t appreciate the anxieties of their parents – I want the best for him, but know there is nothing I can do when he’s at this interview.

He’s continued to surprise me through his educational years getting ten GCSEs when I’d resigned myself to him getting none, these were followed by three A Levels and an AS. He graduated in the summer with a 2:1 in Business Studies and Marketing and I cried all the way home after the graduation ceremony. I think I was letting out the tension of struggling with a dyslexic child through the sausage machine of education – his reading age was 8 when he went to secondary school.

Anyway back to today, I knew he’d shout if I did it, but this morning I was tempted to press a lucky button into his hand when he left. I gave him a button once when he was scared at nursery and told him to press it whenever he felt scared. Needless to say he lost it, but I’d tried. So I’ve sent him out, tall and smart this morning with a metaphorical lucky button and a blast of Reiki. Good luck son. Maybe today is your lucky day.

December being such a short month this year and Christmas coming early!

I once sat next to a colleague at work as he was making excuses on the telephone for not having completed a piece of work. In a voice without any hesitation he pronounced, ‘What with December being such a short month this year and Christmas coming early…’ We never let him forget his words, but I think I’ve started to believe them!

Finishing NaNoWriMo on 28 November, I went into a sort of shock. The post Nano decline made it impossible to write anything or even think logically. I may have completed 50,000 plus words in November, I hope coherently, but I haven’t written hardly anything since.

Following the Nano shock came Christmas panic. I have now written a family newsletter, 144 cards and purchased all of the presents. Phew! Now I wonder why I set myself such impossible targets. The quilted Christmas table runner I began before Nano still needs 75 gold stars stitched into it. I am also making a quilted mat for my Mom – needless to say it is nowhere near finished and the one I planned for my sister not even started. Mmm revision of goals needed perhaps?

I’m also helping a friend with her family tree – no pressure, she wants to give it to her son on his 50th birthday at the beginning of February! However, this one lights me up, I love tracing family trees. Gold stars may lose out to ancestors.

My diary for 2012 lies empty, not because I haven’t anything to put into it, but because I need to sit down and transfer everything over. Last day of term today – I wonder if I could trust my eight year old to write in all the birthdays? He’s just graduated to pen at school and his handwriting is far better than mine. He was star of the week for a poem – A recipe for Christmas – I can’t tell you how proud I was, particularly as he wrote the lot in class so the teacher couldn’t claim parental assistance. Maybe he has a few of my genes and we do have Browning ancestors!

Anyway less rambling. If I don’t get around to blogging again before Christmas, I wish you all a Merry Christmas.

NaNoWriMo Success

If I’ve been blog-quiet for the last few weeks it is because I’ve been working on my NaNoWriMo 50,000 word manuscript to be written in the month of November. I finished the challenge at 50,103 words, but this is by no means the end. The manuscript has a way to go yet and the dreaded editing of course.

What have I learned over the last month? –

• That saying I haven’t got time to write isn’t true – I easily managed 1,700 words a day.

• That I am definitely happier writing longer pieces of work.

• A confirmation that characters can have minds of their own and lead your book into unexpected waters.

• That a theme is definitely emerging in my work which seems to point towards my genre being romantic suspense.

• That my hunger to be published is growing.

This is the third novel I have now completed at first draft stage and I am now determined to edit all three and send them out to prospective publishers.

Off to celebrate now with a cup of tea and a bar of chocolate. How do you like to celebrate your achievements?